A Poem and Thoughts About Hope - The Ebb and Flow of Joy

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By AliciaC

Reaching For the Sun: Photo Credit - Penywise
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Reaching For the Sun: Photo Credit - Penywise

Hope is a wonderful state of mind. It infuses life with positivity and gives someone a new outlook on the world. Although the words “hope” and “wish” are often used in the same way, true hope is not the same as wishful thinking. Wishing involves a desire for a specific outcome that is often unrealistic and very unlikely to happen, such as the wish to win a large sum of money in a lottery. Having realistic hope doesn’t necessarily mean that everything in life will be wonderful, but it’s an expectation that something good can emerge or can be created from a situation.

For some lucky people hope is a continual presence, an old friend that never deserts them. For others hope seems to ebb and flow like the tide, growing and then subsiding for a while. Hope sometimes seems like a seedling that breaks through the soil after winter as the light returns. Like a growing seedling and its opening buds, true hope predicts a productive future. However, seeds are sometimes unable to germinate, or seedings may be crushed or suffocated by debris, too weak to push their way past obstacles. Just like a struggling plant, hope may be unable to emerge, or it may flicker and then vanish. Luckily, just as the earth receives new seeds full of potential, new and viable seeds of hope can be planted in our minds.

Photo Credit: Lisa Solonynko
Photo Credit: Lisa Solonynko

Hope

I found hope again today,
a tiny bud of joy,
that could perhaps unfurl
and grow delightedly,
or shrivel with a sigh
and sink to earth again,
dejected and forlorn.

I like to visit every day
to see how hope survives.
Sometimes I find a slender shoot
that struggles for the sun
and whispers secret happiness,
or surges up towards the light
with power and sympathy.

But then again hope disappears,
concealed by earth and dross,
or choked by spider web,
unable to expand,
battered by distress
and hidden by distrust,
alone and inaccessible.

You thought you’d dug it out
and crushed all life away.
But hope hides carefully
and sleeps through time and pain,
dreaming of release,
and then - I hope -
awakens wide and brilliantly.

Comments

The Baking Guru profile image

The Baking Guru 17 months ago

Beautiful!

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Nellieanna Level 8 Commenter 17 months ago

I like this poem - both for the flow and for the triumph of hope. Lovely!

And your profile picture - I could hug that kitty!

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AliciaC Hub Author 17 months ago

The Baking Guru - thank you for your comment!

Nellieanna - thanks so much. My profile picture shows my cat Nevin, who's four years old at the moment.

Eiddwen profile image

Eiddwen 17 months ago

What a great poem, thank you so much for sharing.An up and beautiful is in order I think.

Take care.

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AliciaC Hub Author 17 months ago

Thank you very much, Eiddwen. I appreciate your comment.

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epigramman 17 months ago

...there is always hope in finding another great writer - and here you are!!!!!

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AliciaC Hub Author 17 months ago

Thank you so much for such a wonderful comment, epigramman.

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epigramman 17 months ago

.....and yes I am a fellow Canadian too, from snowy Lake Erie in Canada.

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kashmir56 Level 6 Commenter 17 months ago

A beautiful up lifting poem, thanks for sharing it enjoyed it very much!

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AliciaC Hub Author 17 months ago

Thank you, kashmir56.

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Bel Marshall 16 months ago

This is lovely. Hope is always there.

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AliciaC Hub Author 16 months ago

Thank you very much, Bel.

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PhoenixV Level 4 Commenter 16 months ago

Very well written poem, great work Alicia!

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AliciaC Hub Author 16 months ago

Thank you, PhoenixV!

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always exploring Level 8 Commenter 16 months ago

Very beautiful poetry of struggle and hope. Delightful.

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AliciaC Hub Author 16 months ago

Thank you so much for your comment, always exploring.

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b. Malin Level 8 Commenter 15 months ago

As long as there is Hope, there is reason to go on, to live, to laugh, to Love...and I Loved

your poem on Hope...A little word that means so much. Thanks for sharing.

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AliciaC Hub Author 15 months ago

Thank you very much for your comment, b. Malin. I agree with you - hope is a wonderful state of mind.

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attemptedhumour Level 5 Commenter 15 months ago

yes without it we are lost, nicely put.

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AliciaC Hub Author 15 months ago

Thanks for your comment, attemptedhumour. Yes, it's very sad to be without hope.

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Lucky Cats Level 7 Commenter 14 months ago

Beautifully written and....yes, full of Hope! Wonderful descriptive phrases and metaphor.

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AliciaC Hub Author 14 months ago

Hi, Lucky Cats. Thanks for the visit and the comment.

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marcoujor Level 8 Commenter 12 months ago

Alicia,

Love your poetry style-- always worth holding out for hope...!

Voted UP, AWESOME & BEAUTIFUL!

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AliciaC Hub Author 12 months ago

Thank you so much for your comment and vote, marcoujor!

Binaya.Ghimire 9 months ago

Poetry undulating the valleys and peaks of human emotions.

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AliciaC Hub Author 9 months ago

Thank you, Binaya.Ghimire. That's exactly the feeling that I had when I was writing the poem.

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Fennelseed Level 7 Commenter 9 months ago

My computer has been revived and I am having a lovely time snorkelling around hubs by my favourites. Came across this beauty. Lovely visuals, love the slender shoot struggling for the sun and the choking spider web. Beautiful words with hope conquering all obstacles. Voted up and awesome.

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AliciaC Hub Author 9 months ago

I'm glad that you have a working computer again, Fennelseed! Thank you so much for the lovely comment and the votes.

Eiddwen profile image

Eiddwen 6 months ago

So very beautiful indeed.

Take care

Eddy.

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AliciaC Hub Author 6 months ago

Thank you for the visit and the comment, Eddy.

Eiddwen profile image

Eiddwen 6 months ago

You are so welcome.

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PDXKaraokeGuy Level 8 Commenter 5 months ago

quite fantastic alicia!

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AliciaC Hub Author 5 months ago

Thank you very much, PDX!

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PDXKaraokeGuy Level 8 Commenter 5 months ago

u are quite welcome!

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